Froggy Friend
by debvanh

Comment by zclare:
very nice, but I find the background a little messy

Froggy Friend
by debvanh

Comment by JLC:
Cute!

Froggy Friend
by debvanh

Comment by JeffDay:
soft focus?

Blue Eyed Dolls
by debvanh

Comment by Traff:
It's a DREAM - the over exposure, I'd suggest, is there to give the image an ethereal feel - I think the idea/concept is apt to the challenge, if anything a stronger even contrastier image may have increased the effect.
I think the image has a great deal of potential... maybe try monotone? or just the slightest hint of colour?.. dunno, just kicking around some thoughts.

Blue Eyed Dolls
by debvanh

Comment by MrYu:
Try direcing the flash into the ceiling or a wall... or diffuse it with something white and big. This is way too overexposed.

Blue Eyed Dolls
by debvanh

Comment by essie:
Looks a little too overexposed for me. Also, I'd try shooting from a slightly different angle next time (maybe from higher up so that the eyes are a bigger part of the photo).

Blue Eyed Dolls
by debvanh

Comment by softhearted:
I wouldn't have left so much light it kind of washes them out. Just a little softness would have done. Otherwise great creativity.

Blue Eyed Dolls
by debvanh

Comment by mknace:
over exposed

Blue Eyed Dolls
by debvanh

Comment by Quigley:
I'm sure that I'm not the first to comment on the over exposure. Try bumping your film speed to 400 or 800 and slowing the shutter speed down to let in more natural light so you can eliminate the flash.

Blue Eyed Dolls
by debvanh

Comment by boyd2000:
I'm sure you've heard this many times already, but the harsh lighting and shadows from the on-camera flash really washes this out. Without the flash, using lamps, etc, would have made this much better. Good detail.