Fill Frame III-
by btrinh

Comment by LN13:
Perhaps a little less eye makeup next time would be more effective. I think the strong point of the original was the clarity of the iris. It just isn't here.

Fill Frame III-
by btrinh

Comment by LanndonKane:
cool, could have brightened the eyes more to make it more like the original

Fill Frame III-
by btrinh

Comment by posthumous:
this is more cinematic and intriguing than the original. much better.

Fill Frame III-
by btrinh

Comment by ZeppKash:
why'd we go with pink?

No to family violence
by btrinh

Comment by violinist123:
Critique Club feedback -

The message in this shot isn't really motivational, and that probably attracted some negative votes.

The crop of the shot, in oroutside of this specific challenge, is really not pleasing to the eye. There are shapes and ratios which we expect to see because they are found in the world around us and have been in use for thousands of years. Sticking to something of a classic rectangular 2:3 or 4:5 crop would probably work much better here.

The image does work well with your message.

Torment
by btrinh

Comment by levyj413:
Well, you got a 9 from me. :) I thought this was very powerful and well-done.

No to family violence
by btrinh

Comment by JLC:
Well done!

No to family violence
by btrinh

Comment by colorcarnival:
Great photo to go with the words. I don't see this as motivational but this IS put together very well. Good luck!

No to family violence
by btrinh

Comment by killjoy181:
Nice poster.

No to family violence
by btrinh

Comment by JohnLampkin:
should do well