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Waiting
04/25/2009 05:49:46 PM
Waiting
by sunita

Comment by Teafran:
The sense of "moment" is present in this image and the obvious character being captured carries some visual impact. Technically, it's a very well composed image which is a plus. From an artistic standpoint, it lacks impact. A worthy entry into the challenge just lacking that something special to make it stand out.
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Fallen
04/06/2009 01:15:14 PM
Fallen
by sunita

Comment by stfleck:
interesting
abstract in brown
09/07/2008 04:02:20 AM
abstract in brown
by sunita

Comment by hotpasta:
depth of field is good
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abstract in brown
09/06/2008 06:11:10 AM
abstract in brown
by sunita

Comment by Tygerr:
Might have been improved if the tips of the rolls were sharper.
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abstract in brown
09/03/2008 10:27:09 AM
abstract in brown
by sunita

Comment by david_c:
Cinnamon? I like the minimalism. Needs a little more unsharp mask.
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complementary colors
09/01/2008 04:22:59 PM
complementary colors
by sunita

Comment by ambaker:
Critique Club Review:

Color Saturation and Hue: Colors are pleasing, and nicely saturated. Best of all, not over done, as is all too often the case with bright flower pictures. Hues are nice and natural.

Brightness and contrast: Image is bright enough, contrast could be a little higher.

Focus and depth of field: Focus appears a little soft. There does not seem to be a real point of sharp focus. Depth of field may be a bith shallow at this f-stop and a contributor to the effect.

As already noted by others, the small file size has hurt you. Jpeg is a "lossy" compression algorythm, meaning that the more you compress, the more you lose in detail, and artifacts of compression creep in. Check your settings when you save. (I don't have Lightroom) but there should be an option to control file size and quality. You want it as close to 150 K in the open challenges as you can get, to preserve all the detail.

The yellow flower does compete for attention as the subject of the image, so some of the purists may have voted you a bit lower if they felt the flower was the subject rather than the vase.

All in all, a well balanced, peaceful image. I could see it in an office or a magazine. It would also make a nice entry for the current catalog challenge as a picture for a vase on sale.
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abstract in brown
09/01/2008 01:12:36 PM
abstract in brown
by sunita

Comment by EBJones:
I like the composition and the contrast between the subject and the white background. This is nicely lit as well. Some of the tips are slightly OOF on one side or the other but I don't think it actually detracts from the overall image significantly.
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abstract in brown
09/01/2008 09:14:28 AM
abstract in brown
by sunita

Comment by photokariangel:
to mee, the focus seems to be a little off.
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abstract in brown
09/01/2008 08:45:02 AM
abstract in brown
by sunita

Comment by JonathanJ:
Cinnamon sticks?
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abstract in brown
09/01/2008 12:37:44 AM
abstract in brown
by sunita

Comment by Nuzzer:
nice shallow DOF & lighting
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