Dutch championship cycle-racing female
by jajone

Comment by Alpine99:
shutter too fast.. no impression of movement

Dutch championship cycle-racing female
by jajone

Comment by kiwiness:
5 points to start with, 2 more cos of the decent composition, 1 more cos they're gurls :-) and 1 more cos I love cycling so much!!! = 9. Understand that?

Cosy Light
by jajone

Comment by p_johns:
I would have rated it higher if I could see what was in the photo frame and the candles and the picture in the background were either more visible or not there. Great idea though!

Cosy Light
by jajone

Comment by skief:
Feel like I need an armchair and a good book to go with that lighting. With the picture being dark and faced the other way, draws me away from picture, maybe you could have tilted the picture toward the light keep my attention on the photo.

Cosy Light
by jajone

Comment by undieyatch:
cosy or cozy?

Cosy Light
by jajone

Comment by shadow:
yes it is indeed a cozy photo. I like it but would like to comment that the upper left of this image, is that a photo hanging on the wall? removing that completely from the image, or making it more visible will improve my score on this. 7

Cosy Light
by jajone

Comment by GolferDDS:
Nice setup. Very pensive. Lighting and shadows are excellent. Good job.

Cosy Light
by jajone

Comment by pncowley:
Surprisingly, I think this photo works. Your color is nice and the texture you captured on the back wall is neat. I like the plant in the right. I am not sure about the thing on the wall on the left and the photo. They are both distracting. I love the flower pot thingy and the candelabra. Nice job.

Green (and brown horses)
by jajone

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Jajone...

The color in your photo is excellent... It definitely meets the challenge with no problems...

This shot is also a nice simple landscape... the two horses really add a nice element to the otherwise boring scene. Without the horses, there would not be much to see other than simple color.

As I look at this photo, I see a smaller composition that I feel would be very strong as well... The horse in the lower left corner... I believe that focusing on that and filling the entire frame with it woudl make a really great shot as well... That would also obviously change the entire theme of what you were shooting here, but I just wanted to possibly point out an opportunity for you...

Excellent shot and keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

Green (and brown horses)
by jajone

Comment by Chuckie:
no comment