Wheels of Time
by janfries

Comment by Patella:
the clock face seems a little dark, perhaps using some white card stock or something to bounce some light into it would lighten it up without creating a glare. I'm not certain what the two "columns" are on the background. If they can't be removed, I'd consider moving your main elements so those strips are more centered on the rest of the image. You might also try the 10 to 2 or 10 past 10 settings for the clock hands (traditional advertising positions) -- that way they're not all bunched up in the same basic spot.

Wheels of Time
by janfries

Comment by magnetic9999:
oo, nice clock! would have blasted this with more light, right on the face of the clock. use a desk lamp or something with directional lighting.

Wheels of Time
by janfries

Comment by ClubJuggle:
I'm not sure what is being advertised here.

Wheels of Time
by janfries

Comment by cbonsall:
nice butthe BG is a bit distracting

Wheels of Time
by janfries

Comment by mykoleary:
You're not going to sell me a clock by showing it fallen apart.

Wheels of Time
by janfries

Comment by Paulo:
Selling wheels?

Wheels of Time
by janfries

Comment by Reuben:
Great construction of the photo, and perfect gear placement.

Wheels of Time
by janfries

Comment by eddy:
This doesnt exactly sell me into the product. Its like a car add with the engine taken apart.

Wheels of Time
by janfries

Comment by zayno:
good concept, but a little fuzzy a far as clarity

Wheels of Time
by janfries

Comment by nborton:
the pins in the wheels are out of focus