Coachmen at rest
by patry

Comment by ivale28:
Meets Challenge:2
Technical:1
Ingenuity:0
Appeal:1
Opinion:0

Coachmen at rest
by patry

Comment by coronamv:
crop to close looses effect would have been better if the whole carriage was in the shot.

Coachmen at rest
by patry

Comment by atupdate:
Back to comment: Sorry to say but this is more of a candid photo than a portrait in my opinion. This image would be easier to accept as a portrait of the coachmen if it were more closely cropped and you could see both of their faces. The color and focus are nicely done but the cropped of back end of the buggy looks a little odd.

Coachmen at rest
by patry

Comment by Citadel:
Not really a portrait. Needs to decide who/what is the subject and focus on that.

Coachmen at rest
by patry

Comment by mkgillman:
This is a really great picture, I like the composition and the colors, but I don't really know that this a portrait, but still a wonderful image.

Alone in the crowd
by patry

Comment by kbhatia1967:
Which one is alone? Perhaps differential focusing would had helped!

Alone in the crowd
by patry

Comment by GrayGhost:
Nice idea. Is the main subject supposed to be Yogi or the ghost? Some additional separation would clarify, although color separation with Yogi might be a challenge. The background seems to suffer from oversharpening / overprocessing, try moving the figures further away from the background for some DOF separation.

Alone in the crowd
by patry

Comment by ionelpop:
nice idea
more color would have helped

Alone in the crowd
by patry

Comment by MaryO:
I think this might have worked better if you left out the ghost and kept more color so Yogi stood out as being really different. Or left Yogi out and kept the ghost. An even tighter focus on your "alone" subject would also help.

Alone in the crowd
by patry

Comment by lauraodom:
Meets Challenge - 2
Lighting/Processing - 1
Composition - 1
Overall Impression - 1
"WOW" factor - 0
Score: 5