locker
by thatguy

Comment by DennisF:
I think cropping out the door edges and leaving just the louveres and boosting the contrast would have been more impactful. Is this the correct color?

locker
by thatguy

Comment by PTLParsons:
Different, simple, to the point, meets challenge, nice focused. Personally I would have cropped out the sides and just gone with the louvers. But that's me. Nice one.

locker
by thatguy

Comment by briphoto:
It's crooked, and plain.

locker
by thatguy

Comment by Anachronite:
yep it's yellow.. just kinda boring..

locker
by thatguy

Comment by Digipixer:
I think croping closer on the left and just a touch on the right would have made this one much better.

locker
by thatguy

Comment by MaYz:
nice photo, but I think what could have added to this is a different framing or crop of the photograph. Maybe cropping out the seams of the locker would have been better because the seam is a bit disrating and takes away from those interestingly abstract locker vents.

locker
by thatguy

Comment by tomzinho:
why didn't you straighten this out and increase the saturation to brighten the color?

Light
by thatguy

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

This is an interesting concept of the cliche challenge.. As far as being considered 'cliche' I'm not sure... I can't recall seeing too many photos of this nature around :)

The color composition you chose on this gives it the feeling of a black light of some sort... It does have a nice abstract effect...

Compositionally, I don' believe that clipping the light fixture with the bottom of the frame is really helping anything... Moving it up in the frame may help out some :)

Keep up the good work!

John Setzler

Light
by thatguy

Comment by Dustin:
nice subject. good job.

Light
by thatguy

Comment by gale813:
VERY interesting photo... I like it!!!!