The Lion Queen
by snowleopard10101

Comment by Allen:
crop this image more to the center would create more intrest.

The Lion Queen
by snowleopard10101

Comment by vtruan:
My kind of fauna cat. Great shot.

The Lion Queen
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Comment by Amiee:
Nice image. But you can't see the lion to well under the shade. The shade makes the left side of the image dark. Good job though.

From above the hill
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Comment by Becky:
The lighting is nice in this photo.

Crossing the Bridge...
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Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

COMPOSITION
A very interesting composition. I think it is good how you have the tracks, poles, adn wires leading into the upper left corner of the frame, while the landscape provides contrast and leads the eyes towards the right of the frame. The empty space on the right is a little distracting in that it is not truly negative space, because there is still "stuff" there, so it doesn't point entirely to the tracks and train. Perhaps a vertical cropping eliminating the right side and showing more of the top of the train would have added impact.

TECHNIQUE
The stark bw of this shot is effective at giving an "empty" feeling to the landscape. It almost looks desolate. I like how the mountains in the background fade into what looks like fog or mist and it seems very sharp to me.

OVERALL EFFECT
Again, I think your coloring, framing, etc. combine to give this pic a less than hopeful feeling. It is a very good picture in that it is technically well done, adn evokes emotion.

Best to you in future challenges.
karmat

From above the hill
by snowleopard10101

Comment by Pedro:
i love that city. you captured it somehow; either the fog or the glare. i like that you didn't centre the tracks.

From above the hill
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Comment by ChrisW123:
Should have got closer to the "edge" so you could see the rail tracks going down the hill.

Crossing the Bridge...
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Comment by snowleopard10101:
Yes, I shot it from a moving train.

From above the hill
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Comment by Allen:
need more light in the foreground and needs to be a little more clear but nice work

From above the hill
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Comment by tiff:
Very nice image good job