Secondary Colorsby
snowleopard10101Comment by ursula: From the Critique Club
Hello, Nitin,
First impression: Your entry is a beautiful picture of secondary coloured pansies. It's a pity that there were so many flower pictures, a number similar to yours.
Lighting: Good. Really makes the secondary colours shine. The green of the grass/leaves looks a little bit unreal.
Focus/DOF: I think DOF is excellent. Focus is good, but I'm having a hard time seeing exactly where the main focus is. The three main flowers are in focus, but seem ever so slightly blurry, but only a very little bit. Actually, that might be good in this case.
Composition: Very good. I like the way the flowers all "look" to the left and bottom, making your eyes go right and up, and then stop without leaving the photo. The flowers fill the frame without crowding it. The thin orangy outlines on some of the petals are charming. Did you take this photo in the evening?
Overall: A good picture, but, in this challenge, probably unnoticed because of the quantity of flower pictures.
BTW, I like your "From Above the Hill" photo - I love the colour/mood, and all the power lines crisscrossing the sky!
Keep up the good work!
Ursula (uabresch)
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