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| 06/22/2003 10:19:55 PM |
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| 06/20/2003 08:09:49 PM |
Mr. Greenby snowleopard10101Comment by HBunch: Definately different. Actually, I was surprised to see the ammount of green people here, but I still think it's original. The purple eye bothers me a bit. And looking stright up your nose isn't the view I would prefer. However, I do think it's nicely framed. Focus also seems good. ~Heather~ |
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| 06/19/2003 03:26:17 PM |
Mr. Greenby snowleopard10101Comment by wingy: I admire the attempt at uniqueness, but the green skin tone (and magenta fringed eye) just don't seem to serve any function or produce a particularly interesting or visually appealing shot. |
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| 06/18/2003 04:21:20 AM |
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| 06/18/2003 12:43:49 AM |
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| 06/17/2003 09:02:54 PM |
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| 06/16/2003 05:41:54 AM |
Sealing Liquidby snowleopard10101Comment by Annida: Hi snowleopard10101
This is your critique for Sealing Liquid, taken for the Liquid challenge.
Let me get this out of the way, it fits the challenge in my eyes!
Moving on to the composition: like frisca said, I like the way the clutter seems to indicate an assembly line at a factory. I think presentation is everything though, and since you didn't give me any Photographer's Comments to work on... I'll make assumptions :) I would have prefered to see all the ribbons facing forward for a bit more of a symmetrical feel to the photograph. I would also have liked to see more of the tops of the bottles, to get the "complete" feel that this seems to lack.
While I like the photograph, I think that flash photography on something like glass can easily go wrong. As you can see there's a strange glare from the flash going on there. I think you need some kind of diffuser... Have you tried to perhaps put up different light with a piece of paper to bounce the harshness away? I wish I could help more in this aspect, but you didn't give me more to work on.
Overall, I like the idea of this photograph, but I think you can do so much more :) I can even imagine it. Thank you for submitting it, and good luck on upcoming challenges!
-Annida |
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| 06/10/2003 09:23:49 AM |
Sealing Liquidby snowleopard10101Comment by qachyk: I think I like the basic idea, but this ends up very cluttered and noisy on a colour level. More even rows of bottles, maybe set off slightly each row, might have helped. Alternating colours might have helped; right now they're kind of grouped. Fewer bottles would have been the other choice. |
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| 06/09/2003 07:50:47 PM |
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| 06/09/2003 07:28:18 AM |
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