Lily
by peggy

Comment by Anachronite:
hocus focus

Lily
by peggy

Comment by Ziggy:
Focus is too soft a bit to me. Would have been better if they are in focus. In my opinion.

Louve Ceiling Panes
by peggy

Comment by Gracious:
Critique Club Comments by Grayce
This is graphically a strong image. It's a simple composition, which I appreciate, yet strong and solid.
My eye gets drawn in by the perspective. The scale is very interesting, and it's good you included the people to show the scale.
I don't agree with the comment that "there is too much negative space." The neg space works well here.
A little more light on the people probably would be enhance the image, but there is enough to make it out.
Overall I like this and I congratulate you on your vision.
Regards,

Grayce

Louve Ceiling Panes
by peggy

Comment by DougPaz:
It actually looks like a painting. Neat take on the challenge and I like the perspective. It may have been just a tad brighter.

Louve Ceiling Panes
by peggy

Comment by PTLParsons:
Great job. Nice focus. Well done. Couldn't have made it any better. Congratulations on a good photo.

Louve Ceiling Panes
by peggy

Comment by 'Pong:
Good composition. IMO it would be nice if we can see more detail below the ceiling.

Louve Ceiling Panes
by peggy

Comment by Bullwinkle:
The power and visual weight of the light panel dwarfing the figures in the gloomy room is a marvel. Almost like a light chasm bursting through oppresion. A good strong photo with an unusual touch of the human element. The dark shadows and restrained hues are very efective.

Louve Ceiling Panes
by peggy

Comment by Becky:
I like the way the lines in the lights lead your eye up the picture. There is too much neg. space.

Louve Ceiling Panes
by peggy

Comment by Amiee:
This is very awesome! I really love this photograph. The concept of squares is very clear and the way that the window gets smaller towards the back of the photo is very catching to the eye. Very nice job!

Louve Ceiling Panes
by peggy

Comment by Dustin:
good subject. the rest of the picture is little darker than it should be