Fortitude-"I can get through this"
by Ubersteiny

Comment by saintaugust:
great detail on the tear

Fortitude-"I can get through this"
by Ubersteiny

Comment by smardaz:
noisemaker? that looks like his cutie pie model. nice shot /8

Fortitude-"I can get through this"
by Ubersteiny

Comment by LMA128:
VERY VERY nice portrait. 10.

Fortitude-"I can get through this"
by Ubersteiny

Comment by Gelert:
WAY AWESOME shot 10

One Night Stand
by Ubersteiny

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Compositionally, I think you have done well to include enough context to help develop the story, but simiplified the shot enough that the "victim" isn't lost in the details.

Technically, the focus is good, and the lighting gives it that "almost morning, been here all night" feeling. I couldn't help but chuckle over the pose is very stiff comment. Woudln't that indicated that you succeeded in making her look really dead? I do agree that not being able to discern the edge of the model from the floor is a bit disconcerting. She looks dismembered. Maybe is she was wearing a different color, or if there was just a bit more light on her. If you were going for the dismembered look, you did well.

Overall, a good shot, and it definitely meets the challenge.
Karma

Fortitude-"I can get through this"
by Ubersteiny

Comment by Denise:
beautiful shot, like the red in the hair and the soft makeup, the eye makeup is perfect

Fortitude-"I can get through this"
by Ubersteiny

Comment by mojoflowerchick:
great lighting.. the tear is just the right touch..

Fortitude-"I can get through this"
by Ubersteiny

Comment by jbushy:
Some people can emote, and others can't. Congratulations to your model, she sells the feeling very well. The tear is a nice touch.

One Night Stand
by Ubersteiny

Comment by Brad:
Yikes - one night not standing.
(sorry)
Body looks just a tad too posed. No matter, still a good shot for this challenge.

One Night Stand
by Ubersteiny

Comment by Patsfan:
Good shot except for the lighting.