Network
by av8orboy

Comment by GeneralE:
I just shot some interlacing branches, but without that lovely snow...

Network
by av8orboy

Comment by Azrifel:
Great textures, very nice. 9

My left foot
by av8orboy

Comment by magnetic9999:
Critique Club.

Clever interpretation of the challenge.

Good colors on the tat and in the photo.

I think, not to be mean, but it would have probably had more photographic impact if you had shaved that area prior to the photo :).

And perhaps a more extreme angle of view :).

SQUARE from Squares
by av8orboy

Comment by DougPaz:
Greetings from the Critique Club };-)

Initial thoughts
Interesting take and certainly meets the challenge, surprised this didn't score a bit higher.

Composition/ Content
I am a big fan of Black and White but wonder if this wouldn't have scored better with a sepia or even light color. Quite ingenious in my mind to form the word "square". Good use of the panorama shot and the word isn't dead center which I think adds to the shot.

Background
None really to speak of.

Camera Work - Technical
Focus seems good but maybe not really sharp.

Digital Processing - Technical
Good cropping on the word. Once again, I think I would really like to see what this looks like in Sepia.

Fits The Challenge
Definitely fits the challenge well.

My Opinion On The Photo
I originally scored this shot a six. It amazes me how evenly spread your votes were. From top to bottom it is almost perfectly even. I think you had a really good idea but it did't have quite enough "wow" factor to really score high. Good job and keep up the good work!


I would be happy to talk further about this shot if you would like to contact me.
DougPaz

Network
by av8orboy

Comment by gale813:
Nice tangle of branches but perhaps you needed a focal point somewhere.

Timber
by av8orboy

Comment by lisae:
Very subtle. The wood pile is a bit difficult to interpret because of the tight cropping. I love the colours in this, but it feels crowded and awkward, and that shadow on the bottom log doesn't help the composition. It leads the eye to the bottom of the photo.

Timber
by av8orboy

Comment by FranziskaLang:
challenge met. i like the colors in this one. the blue sky behind the green tree with some of the snow and then framed by the light wood and snow. also the fact that your "after" frames your "before" works well.

Network
by av8orboy

Comment by pikyto:
Beautiful!

Network
by av8orboy

Comment by Allen:
I really like the snow on the trees. I also like the lighting that you used. Nice Work

Network
by av8orboy

Comment by JamieWillmott:
Nice focus but a bit too cluttered with no real subject for the eye to fall on.