Lay low, Yellow
by vjoz

Comment by BJ:
Really nice shot, well thought out and set up. Nice composition and borders, definately meets challenge. high score :)

Lay low, Yellow
by vjoz

Comment by Sonifo:
I like the negative space. Very good framing and I especially like the mirror. good job

Still here?
by vjoz

Comment by lisae:
I really like this. Great colours. The shallow DOF adds interest and makes more of the shabby state of the tricycle. I'm giving this 10.

Still here?
by vjoz

Comment by CreativeFlyPhoto:
this photo brings back memories - i remember trying to remember to bring the bike in before the storms ... great angle and detail

Still here?
by vjoz

Comment by KarenB:
hmmm. cool concept. the wheel of the trike stops me before I can lead my eye thru the rest of the photo though.

Circle of squares
by vjoz

Comment by shohn:
Hi vjoz --

I am responstible for CC critique this week on your photo.

Photo -- the camera

I like what is done with the slower ISO speed. The photo has been is really sharp and defined. I am guessing that because of this the moisture on the man hole cover appears glossy. What a wonderful effect.

Photo -- post camera work

This is where I am not quite sure what you have done, but I do like the overall effect. Pushing the color levels strongly to the blue. Great job on colors here.

Compostion

I like the simple approach you have taken. It is a sure winner. This is proven by your higher score. The only reason that you didn't get a ribbon this will was because you chose a natural composion as appposed to arranging items in front of the camera.

In general, I prefer your approach to this competition. You only are a week or so away from getting a ribbon.

Good luck in your next challenge.

shohn

Windows
by vjoz

Comment by magnetic9999:
Critique Club

Colors and textures strongest part of this picture. Very artistic. Somehow there is a loss of detail that makes it seem impressionistic. DPC voters may not have appreciated that as much as a more sharply rendered image.

Compositionally, the angle is interesting but I wonder what would have occurred if you had shot perpendicular to the house surface? Or maybe a deeper angle alongside.

Overall nice picture with interesting colors and textures.

Windows
by vjoz

Comment by magnetic9999:
excellent. very artistic, well done shot ..

Circle of squares
by vjoz

Comment by KAOS:

Windows
by vjoz

Comment by lisae:
I LOVE this photo. How do you get those gritty colours? It's fantastic. Lovely composition too. The textures in this photo are blissful. 10.