cracking through
by Cjorgy2oo4

Comment by paynekj:
Nice idea for a subject, but it really needs to be in focus

cracking through
by Cjorgy2oo4

Comment by hannafate:
Focus, please!

cracking through
by Cjorgy2oo4

Comment by beckettboots:
blurry and the composition is somewhat off, an interesting subject, but lacks in execution - it's especially tough if you're shooting your own hand.

cracking through
by Cjorgy2oo4

Comment by kbrashear:
Needs sharper focus

cracking through
by Cjorgy2oo4

Comment by garlic:
Dont know if the egg is the reprentitation of strenght or is it the hand who brakes it?
To be honest then I think this image is technically hopeless and everything else than eyecaching. The main subject(s) are out of focus and if there is anything in focus than it is the background sheet. Iron it next time.
But dont give up and continue experimenting.

cracking through
by Cjorgy2oo4

Comment by jvdpc:
Image out of focus and "unironed" backdrop is distracting.

cracking through
by Cjorgy2oo4

Comment by CDS:
Looks like the focus is on the background, not the subject. Also - the amount of red in the fingers does not look natural.

cracking through
by Cjorgy2oo4

Comment by supercell:
needs better focus

cracking through
by Cjorgy2oo4

Comment by LoudDog:
Blurry, boring, and you should iron your background.

cracking through
by Cjorgy2oo4

Comment by notonline:
looks like you took this yourself. focus not clear and the hotspot from the flash off you thumb looks distracting. also your backdrop needs to be ironed.