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by manx_20

Comment by Blue Moon:
maybe a straighter angle would be more aesthetically pleasing

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Comment by bassbone:
there is something missing - focus or better definition between the light and dark areas is need to make the geometric shapes pop

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Comment by the99:
nice shot, but where is the dramatic effect?

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Comment by talj:
Hi Arek,

Lovely fall colours! They always look so beautiful against a blue sky! For me however, this image lacks a point of interest, the viewer just seems to be directed to stare 'up' at the sky which doesnt have anything interesting for us to look at. I hope you see what I mean?

- Natalya :o)

Message edited by author 2006-10-17 23:54:21.

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Comment by talj:
Hi Arek,

What a beautiful little girl :o) I like your depth of field, slightly blurring the background has worked well here but I feel the almost central placing of the little girl is a bit off putting. With a shot like this it is always good to focus on the persons eyes if you can. I also think If you had slightly turned her so the light was shining on her face better then her eyes would not have been in shadow and this would have really helped the image in my opinion.

- Natalya :o)

at the beach
by manx_20

Comment by Dazmat:
Not enough contrast but compo good

at the beach
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Comment by geekssweet:
Love the fact that you caught them off center and chose to show the beach around them.

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Comment by puzzled:
Pretty color of gold. The skyline is beautiful, but there's something missing for me - I'm sorry, but I don't know what it is. Maybe too much water, or the black line starting just below the skyline, or sharpness. I'm sorry I can't describe clearly what it is. But I do like the color of the sky and the buildings you chose for this very much.

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Comment by freakin_hilarious:
I wonder what they're looking at? Nice composition. I like the empty space off to the left for them to look through.

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Comment by Nikonian Ninja:
very nice shot. I think maybe cropping out more of the water to use the rule of thirds would help. 8 from me!