Ghostly spoon shapes
by spartacus9

Comment by ScubaSteve13:
ooooooooo very spooky nice pic

Ghostly spoon shapes
by spartacus9

Comment by Halim:
very nice ...took time ...right...........9 for taking you time...good jobe

Self portrait
by spartacus9

Comment by Haneck:
This deserved better! a 6.0 score at least...

Self portrait
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Comment by skewsme:
Cheer up, dude! Nice eye.

Self portrait
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Comment by Chinarosepetal:
Good, arresting image. Love the negative space ;)

Self portrait
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Comment by bjoern:
Your left side is a bit too dark.

Dinner for three
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Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Spectacular! Your focus is spot on, making this one nice and crisp. You also captured a great intensity in the blues really making this one pop.

Lighting: I think that your lighting is the strength of this capture. The only flaws I can see with the lighting is the hot area on the shot measure and a small outline of the softbox on the top glass. Even still, I really like the lighting that you created here. Perhaps a polarizer would have toned down the reflections just a hair.

Composition/Content: This is where I think the voters hit you. The composition is a bit cluttered, and it feels too deliberate. I like the stacked glasses, but the chopped bottle seems out of place. I think that sliding the bottle behind the glasses, moving the shot measure out and opening up the zoom a little to include the entire bottle

My Opinion: This one seems like it scored about where it should have as it is. You have a very nice idea and you did a fantastic job with your lighting. With some small changes in the composition, this one would have surely bumped close to a 6.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

Self portrait
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Comment by Benzgirl:
5

Self portrait
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Comment by Haneck:
Eureka! What a striking image! The eye jumped out at me instantly. Excellent composition, I like the use of negative space, the lighting, colors, everything! Really good shot!

Dinner for three
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Comment by Pedxer:
Yeah! Now we're talking! Im liking the blue lighting.