Silhouetted Dreams
by swimmergirl4242

Comment by Blackbox:
Lots of 'jaggies' going on, especially around the hat and arm - maybe oversharpened?

Silhouetted Dreams
by swimmergirl4242

Comment by hokie:
5

Silhouetted Dreams
by swimmergirl4242

Comment by Ken:
Nice silhouette and using a female model is a nice twist. The trees on the right compete for my attention a bit. Colors in the sky add to dreamy effect. 6

Silhouetted Dreams
by swimmergirl4242

Comment by UNTITLED:
A very nice slhouette photo, great pose for this type of photo. A slight bit of repostioning could of eliminated that powerpole. There's also some strange pixelization going on, especially around the hat.

Silhouetted Dreams
by swimmergirl4242

Comment by figment:
nice 8

Silhouetted Dreams
by swimmergirl4242

Comment by xXxscarletxXx:
Love the country feel although I would of liked the B/G to have more omph

Silhouetted Dreams
by swimmergirl4242

Comment by Nald:
Good shot but seems a tad flat IMHO. I like your composition and the model's pose is good. I know you can't do this in an open challenge but cloning out the power tower would help, it's drawing my eye away from the nice lines you've created with her arm and leg.

Swing and Smile
by swimmergirl4242

Comment by melismatica:
Loved the expression of pure exhuberance you captured on the boy's face. No faking that. And contrary to what espy says this sort of capture is not all that easy.

I wasn't crazy about the vertical crop and I felt the b&w tone could have been tweaked a bit. Still, I gave this a 7.

Swing and Smile
by swimmergirl4242

Comment by mfitch_or:
why b/w?

Swing and Smile
by swimmergirl4242

Comment by Skip:
a kid on a swing. grinning, nonetheless. not really engaging and no storytelling. no action. focus is a little soft. what could you do to do better? look at the top 30 images in this challenge after it's over and see if there's something in them that you could try to emulate. if your score isn't where you would like it to be, you might want to read this thread.