will be the last journey with Jacob to our soul
by tanubiswas

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

If you request a critique from the critique club, you should always fill out your 'Photographer's Comments' field when you submit your photo. When you don't include your own thoughts on the image, you can't really expect someone else to give their time and effort to give you a critique. It makes me think that you don't care enough about your own photo to take the time to post your thoughts on it...

I don't think this image stands on its own very well. I don't care much for the lighting and composition you chose. I also can't draw the tie to the challenge from the image either. In a challenge, the challenge topic needs to be dominating and present in the photo...

John Setzler

will be the last journey with Jacob to our soul
by tanubiswas

Comment by xianart:
nice. i just find that heart on the candle cliche and distrcting.

will be the last journey with Jacob to our soul
by tanubiswas

Comment by touma:
i didn't get the relation between this picture & the topic

A long lasting pair
by tanubiswas

Comment by emayner:
so true!

A long lasting pair
by tanubiswas

Comment by Nyck:
gr8 pic,bit more needed in focus???

A long lasting pair
by tanubiswas

Comment by BakerBug:
Would be better if the yellow thing were removed.

A long lasting pair
by tanubiswas

Comment by jaxsond:
I know what you're going for but, it doesnt work......don't think crop ... think re-shoot. Also, remember that everything in your frame you are responsible for and I think that bit of trash beside your right foot just happened to be there.