Its playtime
by jayita

Comment by Claya:
Lot of distracting elements blocking the view of the action.

Its playtime
by jayita

Comment by joycobb:
Wow...what's with the barbed wire? I like the motion blur on the one player. Probably not "artsy" enough to win at this site, but I like the candid street feel to it.

Its playtime
by jayita

Comment by Caillie:
The blue in the foreground is distracting and the out of focus figure detracts from this urban playground scene.

Low Key Object
by jayita

Comment by rick13601:
I have no idea what I'm looking at.

Low Key Object
by jayita

Comment by Artifacts:
Nothing wrong with the minimalist style you selected for this composition. Unfortunately it is not immediately recognizable to most viewers what the object is and they will find that to be a major distraction. Centering the object in a minamalist composition generally does not work all the well. You might want to to a Internet review of minimalist photography to see what others suggest.

Having a lot of black does not make a good low-key image. Tones are the strength of good low-key images and yours does not have a lot of them. The image looks to have a reddish/yellowish color cast to it but that might have been intentional.

Low Key Object
by jayita

Comment by bookworm:
too dark

Low Key Object
by jayita

Comment by Claya:
I can't tell what it is.

Low Key Object
by jayita

Comment by Louis:
Not enough detail to be evocative of anything. For me, were it more recognizable, and closer-cropped, it would have been better.

Low Key Object
by jayita

Comment by paulb_17:
I can't make out what this is.

Low Key Object
by jayita

Comment by justamistere:
Not readily distinguishable as to what it is.