A First Long Kiss on a Second Date
by svt_gEEk

Comment by ibkc:
What fierce passion!

A First Long Kiss on a Second Date
by svt_gEEk

Comment by Beautiful-Joe:
Aww. That's lovely.

A First Long Kiss on a Second Date
by svt_gEEk

Comment by h2:
as the pair is brightly lit on the viewers side, the lamp in the background can't be the main light-Source

Maggie
by svt_gEEk

Comment by Frankie_Lv:
Hello,
I have several problems with this photograph. Her arm is blown out, the ring on her finger instantly caught my eye & keapt drawing it back. Her hair to the left of the picture looks like a black blob, all detail in it was lost. The spot brushing left her chin sticking out like a sore thumb & her left eye 1/2 the eye is way to dark

Maggie
by svt_gEEk

Comment by Simpa:
good presentation

Maggie
by svt_gEEk

Comment by KarisMo:
needs a lot more editing to look pro.stray hair, patchy smoothing.4

Maggie
by svt_gEEk

Comment by vadvirag:
Lights and shadows are harsh and it would work better if the eye was composed following the rule of thirds. Her hand is overexposed which is a little distracting and also her skin looks as it was over-neatimaged. Also a few artifacts of improper blurring can be realised on her face and hair (on the left size for example, the background texture totally disappears behind her hair).

Maggie
by svt_gEEk

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
I like the background, how did you do that?

Maggie
by svt_gEEk

Comment by keans_d:
I can spot all the areas where the spot healing brush is used. She has great eyes and beautiful features but the editing done to cover the blemishes actually emphasized that she has blemishes.

Maggie
by svt_gEEk

Comment by lovethelight:
The smoothing here seems really uneven and throws things off for me