Street Market
by brettt83

Comment by pamelasue:
not very sharp, wish there was a 'main subject' to focus on also ...

Street Market
by brettt83

Comment by Bud:
Nice image and colors, the lack of a central subject is a bit of a downside.

My Baby Girl
by brettt83

Comment by Pug-H:
Hmmm, tones are quite murky, aren't they. Whites of the eyes aren't white... well, good luck.

My Baby Girl
by brettt83

Comment by Coley:
This is a lovely portrait, with a nice focus on her eyes. (Here comes my 2 cents) I would adjust your lighting or the position of your model in such a way as to have the brightness of her face at least 1 to 2 stops higher than your background. I think this would give this shot more depth, and it would help to make it a stronger image than it already is. Good luck in the challenge

My Baby Girl
by brettt83

Comment by ranm:
There's too much contrast in the hair or it's underlit...

My Baby Girl
by brettt83

Comment by Greetmir:
Looks like she is about to step up from baby status. A little too dark for my taste. A keylight would have been nice.

My Baby Girl
by brettt83

Comment by doug61853:
gorgeous model. I think adding a bit more light on her right side would bring out more of her outstanding facial features

My Baby Girl
by brettt83

Comment by candlerain:
Wow. I'd like to see the eyes sharper though...

My Baby Girl
by brettt83

Comment by 99Percent:
Hate to give such a low score for such a gorgeous model :(

My Baby Girl
by brettt83

Comment by h2:
overall a tad too dark and lacking of contrast. her pose and expression seem not to be relaxed, too