water in abstract
by Gaupi

Comment by arnit:
Critique Club:
Heill og sæll. Held að þessi hefði verið betri í svart/hvítu að mínu mati. Það er fín hugmynd að nota vatn í svona en það er eitthvað sem vantar. Spurning hvort það hefði verið betra að fara dálítið nær vatninu. En svart/hvítt og meiri contrast er eitthvað sem ég held að myndi gera þessa mynd betri.

me!!!
by Gaupi

Comment by sfalice:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Welcome to DPC! I see this is just your second Challenge and I'll bet you're having fun setting up your shots.

In an abstract sort of way, your Shadows image has merit, but I'm afraid for DPC purposes, it didn't measure up too well. But look at it this way, Gaupi. You have no place to go but up from here on. (joking)

The odd angle and the colors - probably produced by the indoor lighting and high ISO - just pulled this image down in the ratings. My suggestions for improvement might include bracketing your shots and selecting different angles to see which might be most pleasing.

My best advice is to just keep shooting and getting more practice. Soon you'll be up there with the best of 'em.

I'll look forward to seeing more of your work on DPC.

Alice

skuggi.jpg
by Gaupi

Comment by kirsty_mcn:
This would have done great in the shadow challenge. Nice shot, but focus seems a little off and could do with some straightening

water in abstract
by Gaupi

Comment by hotpasta:
true to challenge, well done

me!!!
by Gaupi

Comment by posthumous:
I like the color and the giant interior mass that is your head. It's suggestive of a rich inner world. 7

me!!!
by Gaupi

Comment by KHolt:
very hard to make out this shadow and the colours appear to be saturated too much

me!!!
by Gaupi

Comment by KiwiShotz:
Cool use of colour. The floor bugs me because it looks like its tipping over. That's clearly what you intended ... just that it doesn't sit right with this viewer

me!!!
by Gaupi

Comment by gazdi:
a bit soft, noisy and oversaturated
also could use some more planning

me!!!
by Gaupi

Comment by The Dmachine:
I dont know what to say, maybe try harder next time.

me!!!
by Gaupi

Comment by Qiki:
You look like a blob. Sorry. Image just needed to be a little more interesting.