walking on egg shells
by Wheeler1992

Comment by Dustin:
Good job. Nice pic.

walking on egg shells
by Wheeler1992

Comment by Gracious:
I like this concept. The image is suffering from lack of clarity. Could also use a different background or more contrast perhaps.

finding the hope in hopelessness
by Wheeler1992

Comment by dbv1:
I like the bright yellow against the drab background.

walking on egg shells
by Wheeler1992

Comment by dsidwell:
A fun idea, especially with the title. Really out of focus, though. And try experimenting with lighting angles and levels to give more impact.

walking on egg shells
by Wheeler1992

Comment by Kaz:
Looks a bit over exposed. Good concept though.

walking on egg shells
by Wheeler1992

Comment by jmsetzler:
The tonal range in this photo is fairly flat and the focus doesn't seem to be very sharp at any particular part of the image... - setzler

finding the hope in hopelessness
by Wheeler1992

Comment by sulamk:
Greetings from the Critique Club
What a lovely old house! Congratulations on seeing the potential of this old house and on seeing the other side of despair Hope!
Composition:Generally good but the house is tilted a little so it looks like it is tipping over.
Focus: A little soft, but not sobad that it spoils the image. It looks like you were shooting in very poor light.
To me the bright splash of the yellow daffodils is the Hope in your title.
Keep shooting You have a good eye and creative imagination The technicallities will come with practice.

walking on egg shells
by Wheeler1992

Comment by rcrawford:
You can go as big as 640 X 640 so I wonder why this photo is so small. Maybe it's your camera? Sharper focus one the eggshells would help too. Good Luck!

walking on egg shells
by Wheeler1992

Comment by kebmod54:
Photo is decent in layout but you need to work on the focus and lighting.

walking on egg shells
by Wheeler1992

Comment by leko2k:
good idea, was a little fuzzy however. a run through an unsharp mask could have help this a bit.