Egg Hunt
by bretgolson

Comment by espy2:
I'm not much for receiving or giving comments, but since Candids are
near and dear to my heart, I have decided to give comment on every entry
in this challenge.

Children in candids are prime targets. This one, I'm afraid, is not well composed. No facial expression, little to no story, dark, little interest. What I like to see in candids is not snapshots of children or family or friends or even strangers. I like to see something out of the ordinary, the unexpected, something that tells a story or sparks stimulation to the eye. Here, to me, this is just a snapshot that was badly composed. It's a 3 for me.

Egg Hunt
by bretgolson

Comment by MrXpress:
The face is where the mood is at

First Impressions
by bretgolson

Comment by LilacSue:
reminds me of the footprint poem

First Impressions
by bretgolson

Comment by The Dmachine:
Adam and Eve??? Adam and Steve??? I'm not sure I understand.

First Impressions
by bretgolson

Comment by love:
think the feet should face each other or maybe be more intertwined?

First Impressions
by bretgolson

Comment by DrKDB:
Clever, really clever approach. I think whoever had the smaller set of prints must've been a little 'heavier' than their counterpart, at least judging by the depth of the shadow. Good job!

First Impressions
by bretgolson

Comment by gjumi:
I don't get it...4

First Impressions
by bretgolson

Comment by ursula:
Cool!

First Impressions
by bretgolson

Comment by jayita:
unique idea!

First Impressions
by bretgolson

Comment by GrayGhost:
Nice idea and composition. An additional element might help, perhaps a rose, a starfish, a sand dollar, etc.