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by tedward

Comment by Gene L.:
Great scene! The exposure appears to be good and the subjects are engaging. Nice fairly nuetral color, which seems fitting to me. I think that this would be a killer image if it had a shallow DOF so as to blur the cluttered background and furthar isolate the subject. Also, a large reflector just left of or perhaps over the camera, might have helped fill the faces of the boys on the right and reduce the shadows.

Grade 1
by tedward

Comment by flip89:
Wow, they are so proper ... good choice of subjects, could be a stock photo. 8.

Grade 1
by tedward

Comment by evylyn:
Your main character is out of focus. It is distracting.

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by tedward

Comment by Nyck:
love this shot

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by tedward

Comment by kteach:
A bit too neat and staged for my tastes. I do like that you've used a school environment though and have the students looking engaged.

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by tedward

Comment by ticker:
Cute, but a tad blurry

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by tedward

Comment by BeeCee:
Focus seems to be off a bit.

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by tedward

Comment by Shan2112:
would prefer more focus on their faces - especially the writer, nice image though and great oppurtunity for you to be able to capture it for this particular challenge - good job :)

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by tedward

Comment by YourBuddyFlo:
Composition needs work.

Grade 1
by tedward

Comment by m_martinhere:
Would have been better in total focus or directing your focus on the child in the middle (definately the center of attention.)