Taylor
by Paige

Comment by h2:
composition is too centered, might have been better if she was leaning at the door, crop at bottom is too close to her coat

Golden Beauty
by Paige

Comment by KarenNfld:
She is beautiful, the light is wonderful.

Golden Beauty
by Paige

Comment by dallasdux:
Very pretty model. I think her left side of her face is a bit overexposed (glare). 7.

Taylor
by Paige

Comment by code3:
If you got in closer this would have been much better.

Taylor
by Paige

Comment by hotpasta:
compositionally I would have preferred a 'rule of thirds' approach...I don't want to be critical, but her expression looks like she is ticked off

Taylor
by Paige

Comment by heathen:
tighter crop next time. utilize either the door or the wall, but using both creates a cluttered and distracting background. the graffiti on the wall begs for a grunge treatment here, which in itself wouldn't have worked due to her wardrobe. the gold of the jacket and the red of the wall do not work well together...b+w might have been able to resolve that problem. lighting is flat...just a bit of light on her face will make a huge difference.

none of that means it's a poor shot...this locale and certainly this model have potential.

Golden Beauty
by Paige

Comment by karmat:
Very lovely young lady. I like her pose and thoughtful look. The lighting is a bit harsh on the right side of the frame, and I think this might detract from the overall "softness" (soft as in gentle attitude, not focus) of the shot.

Golden Beauty
by Paige

Comment by DJWoodward:
Very nice but a little blown-out on her face

Golden Beauty
by Paige

Comment by L1:
Beautiful model, great light. There are some brighter spots on her face that are a tiny bit distracting. I also find my eyes distracted by the bluish/white areas in the background, particularly on the right side near the bottom, and the dark area on the top left corner. I'd crop in a bit closer on the top and right just to eliminate those areas, or clone in the greenery. She seems very centered and I'd rather have some lead room, particularly on the right side since she's looking into the frame. I also find myself wishing to see either more or less of the arms...the mid-forearm seems like an unnatural place for cropping (but that's just me).

Golden Beauty
by Paige

Comment by photoslik1967:
Keep using this model. She is gorgous. I vote a perfect 10.