Mustang - A Fine Cut!!
by androcton

Comment by androcton:
@Ja-9: Yes, I could not frame the picture any other way to avoid that reflection. I thought it was distracting too. It is the striped shade above the car.

Mustang - A Fine Cut!!
by androcton

Comment by Ja-9:
I know this is picky cause you have a great picture here but what is the "strong reflection" on the car's windshield and hood? I'm not taking points away for that...it just distracts from the car

My worst nightmare : ME FIGHTING MYSELF!!!!
by androcton

Comment by Citadel:
Greetings from the critique club!

As mentioned before this is a really great idea that is kinda hard to pull off effectively. Some editing in post would have helped this shot quite a bit I think.

That aside getting away from the wall might have helped as there are some harsh shadows. Also, since your are using a long exposure anyways, I would have used a smaller aperture to get more sharpness.

A different angle would also help set the mood a bit and perhaps get better lighting of your face (especially on the left hand capture).

I'd be interested in seeing another attempt at this shot addressing some of the issues presented here and in other comments.

My worst nightmare : ME FIGHTING MYSELF!!!!
by androcton

Comment by Borusa:
Good idea, however the execution is poor. Difficult thing to do on basic edit and get right.

My worst nightmare : ME FIGHTING MYSELF!!!!
by androcton

Comment by nutzito:
lol

My worst nightmare : ME FIGHTING MYSELF!!!!
by androcton

Comment by animal_lover:
sorry, you had bad lighting, looks fake, and one of you is bigger than the other!

My worst nightmare : ME FIGHTING MYSELF!!!!
by androcton

Comment by Tully:
This could work out better with a different background... even a dark black towel behind you would make this image just POP!
But your worst nightmare... does that mean that you never struggle with yourself??

My worst nightmare : ME FIGHTING MYSELF!!!!
by androcton

Comment by boyd2000:
I'm really curious how you did this. The lighting and shadows are pretty harsh.

My worst nightmare : ME FIGHTING MYSELF!!!!
by androcton

Comment by quiche:
These are hard to do well. Experiment more with lighting and tonal range.

My worst nightmare : ME FIGHTING MYSELF!!!!
by androcton

Comment by Cboydrun:
very cool concept, i think the idea had alot of potential, I would have liked to see it portrayed as an internal battle, but its all good.