The Dunce Cap
by LERtastic

Comment by Bud:
Good colors, good story line...

The Dunce Cap
by LERtastic

Comment by Jutilda:
I'd like to see more of the room, diminishing the significance of the "dunce" in the corner. Great cracks and lines in the walls and floor - I think it would give more of the "empty room" sense if you backed up 10-15 feet.

The Dunce Cap
by LERtastic

Comment by tapeworm_jimmy:
Nice idea. The crop kinda bothers me though. I would like to see some more of the room. Maybe a corner or something? 7

The Dunce Cap
by LERtastic

Comment by hotpasta:
a lot of fun...nice work

The Dunce Cap
by LERtastic

Comment by amandalore:
hehehee... I was thinking of entering a pic like this for the failure challenge, nice job though, love the textured room and composition

Looking Up
by LERtastic

Comment by littlegett:
don't care for this at all. Looks like a poorly drawn paintshop image. The prespetive is almost interesting, but the image itself is two even. Needless to say, this could be totaly true of this design, but, just looks fake to me.

Drive My Car
by LERtastic

Comment by charleyangel:
maybe more cropping to eliminate glare?

The Prairie Sunset
by LERtastic

Comment by kari1:

::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting shot .. good composition ...sometimes it pays to stop the car.

Composition:
I like the way that the lines are around each thirds mark .. the dark area .. then the blue from the top.

Subject:
I think the scoring reflects that people thought more that it is a good shot .. than a true to challenge pic. I don't really feel heat from the picture .. as Dr Achoo says .. the blue cools it down.

Technical (Colour and light):
Natural light ... lovely shot ... great sharpeness.

To grow its vote?:
I think that the comments you have recieved reflect well on how to improve.

Summary:
Well done .. I think you have a great eye ... keep it up

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Drive My Car
by LERtastic

Comment by Dave Gordon:
Quite a gleaming beauty, nicely photographed.

Drive My Car
by LERtastic

Comment by Gatorguy:
In generaL, a nice car shot, but the reflection of the truck is not good and it's too hot on the left side. Meets the challenge for me. 6