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Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Very nice! Awesome depth of field and terrific lines. I like really like the perspective and vanishing point that you captured. It is especially nice from the ground-level point of view that this was snapped from. It so cool that, with the first glance, it appears that everyone is looking at the camera, as if expecting the shot.

Lighting: While the sky looks a bit hot, all your subject appear nicely lit. This also adds some nice contrast, as well as finishing out a strong tonal range for the overall image.

Composition/Content: Again, wonderful. I am not quite sure how much corrine was drinking before she added her silly comment, but I am guessing it was a LOT. Perhaps the word 'sport' means something much different in her native tongue. This meets the challenge very nicely, and your score reflects that nicely.

My Opinion: This is a very nice and very strong score, but I fell that it is still far too low. This one should have slid up there into the top ten, maybe even the top 5. The image is a very solid entry.

Corrine, lay off the liquor.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

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Comment by jaysonmc:
One of my favorites. Wish it would have placed higher because it is a superb photo!

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Comment by Melethia:
I'm guessing this is a very cool planetary display somwhere - great muted colors, wonderful light and texture. A very nice presentation!

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Comment by Pedro:
bonus points for sweet design skills.

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Comment by vontom:
to me, there seems to be too much balance between the cyclists and the skyline. i might have tried, as you may have, cropping the top down so the people were the bottom two-thirds, maybe even more, and go for a very panoramic perspective. still a very interesting picture.

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Comment by Alicia:
Woah - a little freaky. They all look like they're looking at your camera.

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Comment by ryecr:
Out of this world!

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Comment by whatdewuc:
Nice work...

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Comment by scottjk62:
A slightly busy image but it works for me. Suggestive of conceptual music on the album.

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Comment by abranton:
Cosmic Force seems more visible than the actual name of the band. I would probably swap the fonts.