Scratched Surface
by metaphox

Comment by Lionsitaly:
is ice where you live ?

The Fence on top of the World
by metaphox

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*

While it is an interesting photo, like you, I'm not sure if it really screams interesting perspective. Obviously, everything is a perspective, but what i was looking for in this challenge is a perspective that added something to the subject.
The fence is barely visible in ths shot. maybe if you had a flashlight and long exposure you could have painted it by hand. That could have definately been interesting.
The colors are neat. I like the red/blue of the sky.
The lights of the city really don't add much to the photo. They seem to be too bright, or too blurry to really matter much.
So, while you have a neat sky, there's too much of a lack of detail in the city and not enough light on the fence to really work for me.
There's really no where around here where a person can go to overlook a city, so definatly not something I see every day. I'd trek up there often on good nights to experiment with different things.
~Heather~

The Fence on top of the World
by metaphox

Comment by desertdoc:
Those three black square things that blend in with the other black stuff? Is that the fence on the top of the world? Who are they trying to keep out of there anyway?

The Fence on top of the World
by metaphox

Comment by ktm7:
nice shot. great colors. nice job.

The Fence on top of the World
by metaphox

Comment by amyrh:
The only problem that I see with this photo is that there isnt enough lighting on the fence. Just a little more and it would have been great.

The Fence on top of the World
by metaphox

Comment by photodude:
Would have benefited from a little more exposure of the foreground

The Fence on top of the World
by metaphox

Comment by AzCKelly:
Neat shot! I didn't score it as high as it could have been. The fence line is hard to separate from the city and mountain lines. It just blends too much where you've captured it now. What a wonderful view!

Texture from Texas
by metaphox

Comment by malenki:
a very good macro, but the subject of the photo is a very common one in this challenge...however i have to admit that i kinda like your photo:).

Texture from Texas
by metaphox

Comment by HBunch:
The texture is interesting in the bottom right corner. It hink though that this could use a different crop or angle. Most of the photo is made up of the background, which doesn't really add to the photo for me. The DOF is good, but to the point where I can't tell what the dark circle in the center of the photo is. It appears to be metal, since it's got a large light reflection on it, which is also distracting. If that object were meant to be in the photo, then having it in better focus might work. If it's not serving a purpose, then I think it would be better if it were not in the photo at all. Maybe hide it behind the raised part of the subject? A slightly different angle may hide it. Lighting otherwise seems ok, I like how the texture shows up in the shadow as well. ~Heather~

Texture from Texas
by metaphox

Comment by OdysseyF22:
Too much of the picture is out of focus to really see what it is and understand it.