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by Kaneda

Comment by LanSnake:
Greetings from the Critique Club;

This landscape photograph provides an element of mystery, due to the fog. I like how the background elements vanish in the distance. This effect seems to pull the viewer in, as they try to see what might be hidden just at that line where you can only make out the shape of objects.

While I like the composition, I think there may be a little too much fog in the upper third of the photograph. One way to add an element of interest to a fog photograph is to have an object, a fence for example, that runs from the foreground into the background. This could provide a viewer a better 'yardstick' so they can judge how thick the fog is. This element could also help to pull the viewer into the photograph, to examine more closely those objects in the background.

A level adjustment might also help with this photograph, as it seems that the entire image is a bit dark.

LanSnake

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by Kaneda

Comment by stephan:
Should have placed better in my opinion. I was one of the two tens ;-)

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Comment by stephan:
Good composition. I like how the background vanishes in the mist.

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Comment by lisae:
I think this could do with a tiny bit more tonal depth, by adjusting the levels and increasing the saturation. The composition is very strong.

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Comment by DougPaz:
Good shot but a little too misty in the background.

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Comment by Jacko:
I like the feel of this shot, like at my cottage on a cold morning. however I think I'd like to see less sky, looks a bit empty. Good luck. Jacko

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Comment by Lustre:
Is it deliberately untitled? Perhaps you could have called it "vanishing landscape" or something? Unfortunately I have little else to comment on - there is a lot of grey and not much going on.

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Comment by catpixel:
Too many awesome pics this week. This is one of them. 10

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Comment by Swashbuckler:
Nice foggy sand dunes. I like the grass in the foreground. Not alot of drama or interest. The heavy fog dims the color, too. 6 Swash

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Comment by Turbotech:
I think it is a tad too dark. Slower shutter speed would have worked a little better.