forsaken wangon
by haylees

Comment by CEJ:
What is a wangon? For a challenge entry I would think you would bew more careful with your title. it does affect the overall perception. Spelled incorrectly gives the impression of lazyness or just not caring. I think this would have been stronger also if the background wasn't so bright. It 'glares' at you taking away from your subject.

forsaken wangon
by haylees

Comment by srdanz:
too little of the wagon is showing in the photo, with the extremely blown up skies ruining it, too.

forsaken wangon
by haylees

Comment by Jutilda:
The focus is on the leaves and not the wagon. Maybe taken from a different perspective would have shown it off better.

up the spiral stair case
by haylees

Comment by mmargo:
nice idea; the angle could have been better

up the spiral stair case
by haylees

Comment by apprentice:
Excellent use of the sky as a background.

up the spiral stair case
by haylees

Comment by sfalice:
Interesting composition. wonder how it would have looked as a vertical? good catch in any case.

up the spiral stair case
by haylees

Comment by popdeepop:
The darkness of the subject is a worry for me. A lighter sky would be less of a problem to let me see the metal better.

up the spiral stair case
by haylees

Comment by smilebig4me1x:
my goal is to comment on every photo in this challenge..heres urs..good luck.. this might have been better from a dfferent perspective IMHO...nice colors

up the spiral stair case
by haylees

Comment by kitchwitch2:
Bad angle.

up the spiral stair case
by haylees

Comment by CEJ:
I might have liked a slightly different angle so more of the space between steps could be seen, but I do like the contrast between the stairs and the sky (more than one shot with this contrast this time around). Since a lot of the railing is showing more of the highlights like in the middle would have been nicer. Nice shot overall.