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| 05/29/2006 07:45:00 PM |
Shabby Chicby blazingmoonlightComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
My first impression is that this is a very nicely set up still life. I like the arrangement of the items and the colors work well together.
The focus seems to me to be a little soft overall. I'm not sure if you were going for a soft look, however, I would love to see very crisp lines throughout. The texture of the flowers is almost lost and i would love it if this could stand out more.
The dark flowers are a little dark to really make out, and therefor don't seem to add to the photo as is. I think maybe a side lighting directed at the purple flowers might have added enough lighting to help bring those out, and maybe the wording on the jar as well?
I really love the colors in this shot. I like that the background has a slight variance in color as well. I like how it goes from light to darker. I think this adds something to the photo. I'm glad it's not all a solid color.
this is very well done. really, the only thing I'd change, like I said is the lighting on the purple flowers and slightly crisper lines. nice job, and scored right where you predicted.
~Heather~ |
| 05/23/2006 06:29:52 PM |
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| 05/21/2006 02:22:40 PM |
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| 05/19/2006 03:57:37 AM |
Shabby Chicby blazingmoonlightComment by JunieMoon: I like what you did here. I sell prints at my shop, and the only thing that might make this more marketable would be a different color background. Also your focus needs to be a tad sharper. |
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| 05/18/2006 10:12:58 AM |
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| 05/18/2006 08:57:16 AM |
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| 05/18/2006 08:08:22 AM |
Shabby Chicby blazingmoonlightComment by RKT: Before I even saw the title that's the first thing that popped into my head! Great soft and subtle light and excellent collection of "shabby" items...beautiful beautiful! |
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| 05/18/2006 04:02:21 AM |
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| 05/17/2006 11:52:42 PM |
Shabby Chicby blazingmoonlightComment by temba: Nice arrangement. The glass (?) stopper or whatever seems a little out of place - I'm not sure that it is adding anything to the overall impact. A |
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| 05/17/2006 07:22:32 PM |
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