Fried
by aaronwave

Comment by dallasdux:
Great shot of the fair. Nice use of lighting and colors. I am a little intrigued by the the swooping light in the bottom left corner. The spinning top is really cool and reminds me of a wicker basket. 9.

Fried
by aaronwave

Comment by photojournaliste:
hehehehe coool!!

I think i'd be even better if you cropped the bottom part and only kept the wheel. :)

Fried
by aaronwave

Comment by Blackbox:
Thanks for finding something interesting to look at. They give us the chance to use lighting, which we undoubtedley have to use in every photo and instead of being creative, most people blew it by choosing something ordinary. I'm not voting but if I was, I'd have given your photo a 10...the tilt is extra creative where I normally like level objects.

Fried
by aaronwave

Comment by alanbataar:
I am a complete sucker for shooting at the fair. There's so much dynamic, saturated light to capture! Personal favorite so far!

Fried
by aaronwave

Comment by hotpasta:
this shouls do well...great capture...

Fried
by aaronwave

Comment by Zygote:
Excellent shot with great balance and movement...well planned and constructed

Dock Blues
by aaronwave

Comment by PaulE:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Hi Aaron,

This is a technically sound shot, that really doesn't move me. I do like your choice of textured, warper wood to convey the high-contrast; and think that you have done an excellent job on the editting here. The deck however makes up less than half of your image. You have a good idea here that needs to be taken further to produce a really engaging image. A lower point-of-view (POV) may have given a more interesting perspective, or perhaps the application of some standard photographic guidelines, such as the rule of thirds and leading lines.

I have always found the following articles on composition very useful: //ronbigelow.com/articles/adv_comp/adv_comp.htm . I do not have 'the artistic eye' so I do my best to apply these concepts in the hoep that understanding of why the work will coem to me.

It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.

Cheers
Paul

Dock Blues
by aaronwave

Comment by ScotArt5:
Nice texture showing on the dock.

Dock Blues
by aaronwave

Comment by Retroesque:
Great title - nice capture

Dock Blues
by aaronwave

Comment by nadiaC:
love the blue and black. . .was kind of hoping the dock would be a little warmer (less harsh)to go along with the dark and peaceful water.