The beginning of defiance
by mlhop05

Comment by bbmohr:
great idea. I really like the colors, and the expression of your model. Not sure about the lighting and background though. 7.

The beginning of defiance
by mlhop05

Comment by ClickNSee:
Nice image, or at least nice idea. I know it would have been tough, but this might have been a winner if taken outside amongst some trees rather than in a studio setting. <6>

The beginning of defiance
by mlhop05

Comment by Chinabun:
too staged

The beginning of defiance
by mlhop05

Comment by Matthew:
my gf refused to do this... good job in getting the idea onto film (as such). Slight lack of sharpness detracts and it looks as though there is a bit of noise in the image generally. Maybe your ISO setting for a (presumably) indoor, curtains closed kind of shot. Consider applying a bit of sharpening to the pic (remember to do this last).

Compositionally, the apple might have been more interesting outside the centre of the frame.

The beginning of defiance
by mlhop05

Comment by Sammie:
Very good idea. The picture itself is kind of grainy and the lighting is sort of dull.

The beginning of defiance
by mlhop05

Comment by kaharper:
Did Eve wear make-up?

The beginning of defiance
by mlhop05

Comment by hopnjohn:
Hmmm! It might be my monitor or my tired eyes, but she seems out of focus. The shadow is a little distracting.

The beginning of defiance
by mlhop05

Comment by wheeledd:
I thought she wasn't supposed to cover herself up until AFTER she ate the apple.

The beginning of defiance
by mlhop05

Comment by IceRock:
Beautiful model, but picture need to be sharper and color adjustment needed nd model is to stiff .. ir

the ultimate bore
by mlhop05

Comment by mlhop05:
Thank you all for commenting. I hope to learn something. I know this was not a strong photo it was only my 2ns submission ever so I was hasty. Thank you.

mandy