Flower Powerby
photogenixComment by amber: Hi from the Critique Club!
This is a wonderfully soft and delicate study. This probably worked a little against you in terms of score. A burst of colour suggests something dramatic, yours is very muted and subtle in comparison with the top three, for example.
That said: I love the contrast of the yellow against the red. The yellow is showing white artefacts, however,which are a little harsh and detract from the overall softness of the image.
I quite like the DOF, again it adds to the overall calm, serene feeling the image evokes.
The composition is bold and, for me works. The lines of the petals creates a half circle that leads the eye around the image.
The lighting seems a little flat,I'd love to see a bit more shadow on the petals for more depth and contrast.
Overall, a wonderful soft, dreamy image that leaves me feeling calm. Well done.