Orange Crystal Light
by joyinlight

Comment by Cantique:
This is an interesting idea and a striking pattern of light and shape. What doesn't work for me is that so little of it is in focus. This same image in sharp focus would be dynamite.

Pre Applehauce
by joyinlight

Comment by ecko313cheer:
This is a nice image. I really like how you blurred out the background. Nice work.

Orange Crystal Light
by joyinlight

Comment by kiwinick:
excellent pattern shot looks a bit soft tho. 7

Orange Crystal Light
by joyinlight

Comment by arngrimur:
I like the cubist feel of this shot. However I feel that it lacks shatpness or a definete focus point.

Orange Crystal Light
by joyinlight

Comment by Bear_Music:
If only this were sharper... It's quite lovely conceptually. But it's just too damned soft, and the softness is at odds with its linear, hard-edged nature.

Orange Crystal Light
by joyinlight

Comment by mrsmaxsmart:
nice abstract 7

Pre Applehauce
by joyinlight

Comment by Minstrel:
i love the anticipation of those big lips wrapping around the fruit. Watch your fingers!

Inside Intel
by joyinlight

Comment by khdoss:
Hello from the Critique Club!!!

Composition:

This is a very nicely composed shot and it is great to see that you keep trying to get the shot right for you.
Not all of us can see the beauty inside a computer but you have achieved it with this photo. I like the angle and the lighting. The view of the fan and crisp lime green adds to the overall appeal. I think this a perfect shot for Stock photography. Met the challenge “Outside Looking In” well

Background/ Foreground
The shallow DOF has the background blurred which is good since there is so much going on in the foreground.

Camera Work:

The focus is good and the colors are bright and crisp. The lighting is a okay but the white on the power is a bit over exposed. This takes away the some of the detail.

Post-Processing:
I think you got it all right in your editing.

My Opinion:
This is a nice shot, you took the time to go back and try it again from a different perspective and this time you achieved your goals. Each of us learns from each shot we take and the comment made from fellow DPC members. Good Job!

I hope you find these comments to be helpful, thank you for allowing me to critique your picture. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to contact me via PM.

Best of luck in your future photographic endeavors,

Regards,
Karen Doss

What we do for DP!
by joyinlight

Comment by Steveinnz:
nice try....good luck

Pre Applehauce
by joyinlight

Comment by Lenny_D:
Picture is too unsharp. The animal could be unsharp because of the movement but the apple should be sharp.