a view of the moon.
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment by admart01:
Creative idea - needs a bit more light. I like the placement of the moon and the birds. A stronger tie to the theme via the title or composition would help.

a view of the moon.
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment by snowflake:
like it's simplicity

a view of the moon.
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment by flip89:
Good subject and a very lovely picture. There is an overall gray cast that could be corrected (in Photoshop) by autolevels or added saturation (still within challenge rules). It would also have more power if the two birds are offset toward the right side and not dead on center. If you crop halfway from the bottom to the first set of wires and about two thirds from the right border to the first bird and probably about an inch from the top, you might end up with an improved composition. It's a lovely picture, don't get me wrong.

a view of the moon.
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment by legalsteven:
A lovely, simple, clutter-free shot. I wonder if it's an especially novel point of view.

a view of the moon.
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment by GoodEnd:
To me your primary subject is the wires. The birds and the moon are a bit distrating. Sorry by my "bad humor", but I undestand the life in city, with these wires splashed over all great subjects. Try to read the rule the Rule of Thirds tutorial, in tutorial session of this site, will help you to define a primary subject.

a view of the moon.
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment by Albertmdh:
thats eerily romantic.

a view of the moon.
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment by f0rTyLeGz:
a beautiful photograph...

a view of the moon.
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment by HRoxas:
Wow, very nice photo. I like it a lot. 8

bark
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment by Olyuzi:
Not that bark can't be interesting, but a more creative way to have dealt with this subject, for instance, would have been to have cropped the image in landscape format, put a large white border around it and title it:" Bar(k) Code.

bark
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment by Jaguar:
Not a complete subject.