goalie..ball...and me
by alixmiles

Comment by Riponlady:
good action shot , figures may be too centralised but ball is in right place, sharp

goalie..ball...and me
by alixmiles

Comment by The_Itinerant:
Crop the sides away so that the two players aren't centered, especially on the left. All that empty space is distracting from the action.

goalie..ball...and me
by alixmiles

Comment by peecee:
I can't see the third rule here unless it was inted for the ball to be the main subject, a little snapshotty. The cutting off of their legs is a little off-putting.

goalie..ball...and me
by alixmiles

Comment by sabphoto:
Fits challenge=4
Color/lighting=1
DOF/focus=1
Wow factor/uniqueness=0
Attractiveness=0

Not sure what is supposed to be the main subject. A few too many items to really make the subject POP out at you. I really kind of expected a strong subject that would be easy to tell from just the rest. I think #11 and the soccer ball are both in respective 3rds areas but the goalie is centered. You've got good lighting and your depth of field is right on.

Good luck

Skating beyond the Fence
by alixmiles

Comment by Nullix:
I don't see the texture. The colors are dull too.

Skating beyond the Fence
by alixmiles

Comment by eyebyfaith:
Depth of field nicely illustrated. Congrats!

Skating beyond the Fence
by alixmiles

Comment by savannahjames:
I think this shows more of a pattern than texture....there's really nothing there for me to "feel".

Skating beyond the Fence
by alixmiles

Comment by Germaine:
Sorry. I don't see any texture at all. The fence makes an interesting pattern though.

Dad...are grenades ok to play with?
by alixmiles

Comment by LowLght:
I like this idea a lot and think I would have scored it a point higher if the background was a brighter white.

Dad...are grenades ok to play with?
by alixmiles

Comment by rex:
Made me laugh....that is a good thing