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The land of the Angelica
09/19/2005 07:31:29 AM
The land of the Angelica
by jonasg

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*

This photo sufferes greatly from lack of focus. Not having any photographers comments, it's impossible to know what you were trying for here. My biggest piece of advice is if you want someone to spend the time to critique your photo, then you could spend the time to give that person some info.
That being said, the focus hurts my eyes. I can't see anything really. The forground is huge and blurry, which is a distraction if you were trying to take a photo of the background.
The background itself is blurry, so what could be a beautiful scene is really lost in the fuzziness.
Colors seem muted. No real punch in the colors. Maybe a hue/saturation boost and play with the brightness/contrast some.
I can't really tell, but these look like plants or weeds, and that would be considered stems, not branches.
I think had someone in the photo been in focus, this could have been a lot stronger shot, however, as is, it is not as appealing as it could be.
~Heather~
The land of the Angelica
09/13/2005 06:46:32 PM
The land of the Angelica
by jonasg

Comment by liah:
idk wat Angelica is and idk is ur subject is the stream or the plant thingy cuase it is focused on the stream
The land of the Angelica
09/13/2005 04:57:01 PM
The land of the Angelica
by jonasg

Comment by RonBeam:
So good to see an exploratory shot like this one. Keep exploring with varying focal points and color combinations. Distinction comes from "branching" out.
The land of the Angelica
09/13/2005 08:38:47 AM
The land of the Angelica
09/13/2005 06:15:57 AM
The land of the Angelica
by jonasg

Comment by Lucy Caya:
a little bit of contrast for adding some punch
The land of the Angelica
09/12/2005 07:35:37 AM
The land of the Angelica
by jonasg

Comment by Germaine:
IMHO, the blossoms in the foreground should have been tack sharp. Otherwise, nice colors and capture of the water.
The land of the Angelica
09/10/2005 08:21:34 AM
The land of the Angelica
by jonasg

Comment by Caine:
Poor use of DOF, and makes the flowers in the foreground just seem like it's in the way..
The land of the Angelica
09/10/2005 07:03:36 AM
The land of the Angelica
by jonasg

Comment by BattMom4:
This shot really suffers from the unfocused plants in the front.
The land of the Angelica
09/09/2005 07:06:34 AM
The land of the Angelica
by jonasg

Comment by dcflyer:
foreground needs more focus. everything seems blurry
The land of the Angelica
09/08/2005 09:07:50 PM
The land of the Angelica
by jonasg

Comment by Krikkit:
nice place. Seems a bit out of focus
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