Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by ZorbaTheGeek:
Unfortunately the two boys are a bit low in the frame. THe lower of the two has his arm across his eyes meaning we can't see his face. It's generally a goo idea to avoid severing a limb at a joint (ankle, knee, wrist etc) and try to crop halfway along a bone. Focus and exposure are good.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by KarenB:
isn't THAT the truth! :)

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by Germaine:
Good idea and it certainly meets the challenge. I would tweak the colors a little. It's too bad the boy on the bottom has his arm in front of his face.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by Caine:
It would be ironic if the logo on that shirt was from a playstation game. The composition would be vastly improved if the two boys were fully in shot and the interaction between them and the branches was the entire subject. Some canopy in the top of the frame (think rule of thirds) would work, but there's far too much at the moment.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by stphq:
good title... so very true.... (now where did i put my tekken game disk... hee hee)

50's Movie Maker
by wasp

Comment by blondmcfly:
I wish I could see more of the machine.

50's Movie Maker
by wasp

Comment by AtlantaRockScene:
Very soft focus, it would be better if more of the dials were crisp. Good subject matter though!

50's Movie Maker
by wasp

Comment by ZiaT:
I like the subject. The gears make an interesting composition, but the image needs a bit more sharpness contrast to really pop. It look like you might have needed a little more light. Also, maybe a closer crop would highlight the interest of the piece better.

50's Movie Maker
by wasp

Comment by Canadian_eh:
lol, maybe modern is good?

50's Movie Maker
by wasp

Comment by CLarson557:
I assume that this is a camera. I would like to see more of it then just the dials. Looks like this might have been taken through a window