Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by theskitch6:
Good title. Fits challenge. Too much left to be desired. That branch sticking in on the right totally doesn't belong. The boys clothes are really distracting.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by jaaad:
The best kind of play

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by LoudDog:
Some pointers... If the kids are the subject of the photo, you may want to have them look at you, but you must be able to see both faces. Here it seems like they are posing for someone else and you jumoed in and took a shot.
Photos of people need to have something to make them interesting. If you don't know these kids there is nothing interesting here. An expession, a smile, lighting, an action, something more then just posing in a tree.
Technically wise, the photo lacks crispness and is possibly overexposed.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by Krikkit:
a bit over exposed?

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by davmct:
way overexposed, bad pose on second kid w/hand in front of face. need to take more time to find the right moment instead of the first moment.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by wavelength:
a little washed out by the flash. need to work on the composition a little.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by racha:
This photo is way overexposed. The kids are kind of pinkish too. I can't see one boy's eyes, if you're taking a picture of someone's face it is most important that you can see their eyeballs.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by bobdaveant:
The whites seems a little blown out, but I like the theme of the photo.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by Tammer:
For me, the lighting is a bit bright and it's unfortunate that the one boy has his arm across his face...and I'm curious as to what or who they are looking at. :-)

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by BK1017:
I like the title & idea behind it