From The Grass
by yonderman

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Great composition and colors, but I find my eye being drawn to the out of focus barn.

From The Grass
by yonderman

Comment by TDubb:
Would like to see this in a bit more focus.

From The Grass
by yonderman

Comment by got2bgutsy:
I wish that blade of grass was more in focus... but i like the idea!

From The Grass
by yonderman

Comment by jerryc12:
This could have been a good photo but nothing is sharp.

From The Grass
by yonderman

Comment by AVP:
lacks sharpness on subject, a shame as the scene is very nice and the bokeh is creamy

Disney Wedding
by yonderman

Comment by david_c:
Wedding? Disney World? That's sort of like Peanuts & Bubblegum.

The composition is a touch "busy". I might have tried to pick out one specific element (the cake, perhaps) and make that the focal point of the image.

The Rock .jpg
by yonderman

Comment by Trumpeteer4:
Great motion blur.

Disney Wedding
by yonderman

Comment by UrfaK:
The colours are very brilliantly vibrant.. very intersting pic..

Uneven Blue Reproduction
by yonderman

Comment by see:
The photo search seems to have failed again to find your title, so I am left to rate a photo as is. Your subject is nice looking, eye color is right on clear and bright. Your DOF seems a bit uneven. I think setting the strength of the blur much lower around the eye and slowly increasing strength as you get closer to the camera would have helped a lot. All in all I like the picture and give it a 8.

Uneven Blue Reproduction
by yonderman

Comment by CNovack:
Very nicely done emulation of the original! Love the blue of the eye which jumps out at you because that punch of color contrasts well of the pale skin tones of the model. I think you could safely go with adding a bit more saturation to the eye color to really make it pop out more. Not too much for you don't want to go overboard and overly oversaturate it. Also with just a little touch more of contrast that blue tone can have a nice richer, deeper hue. My only other suggestion on how to improve this composition is to be careful on how much light is illuminating the subject. The skin tones are not all even. The cheek area has blown highlights or looks a bit more overexposed than other parts of the face. Bouncing the light of another reflective source so that it doesn't hit the model full on would be one suggestion on how to correct the problem. Or you could diffuse the light source by placing a thin cloth a few feet away from the light source such that it scatters the harsh 'spotlight' and evens out the lighting to softer shades of illumination thereby getting rid of harsh light with blown highlights.