Golden Sunrise
by LVE

Comment by sherpet:
Gloden glow is quite strong.....

Solar Lighted Impatients
by LVE

Comment by kari1:
Kari from the critique club. I am Doing this from work Larry so please forgive the lack of my normal template.

First impression:

Interesting pic ... makes me want more of the flower and less of the background.

Composition
I feel there are issues with this is not too bad .. you have hit thirds with both flowers ... but it is the huge gap that just doesn't sit quite right.

Technical

This is a grainy picture ... I am not sure why, it sounds as if it was well lit .. but I think the ISO setting is too low for the level of light you had. Maybe adjusting this may have helped (this is a guess and an area I am still learning too). Some of your pixels appear to be very significant .. this happens in a number of different ways including when you blow up the size of a picture, or even zoom in so much that you can see every little one.

Subject:

Meets the challenge - you did say it was 2 second shutter speed :)

Moving onwards and upwards:

Not your highest scoring ... but it was I am sure an adventuresome shot. Well done on the effort and again I always look forward to seeing more of your work.

Any questions on the critique drop me a PM

Cheers
Kari

Message edited by author 2006-04-02 19:42:53.

Apocalypse At Cozumel
by LVE

Comment by sherpet:
What a great sky shot, so unusual, but so good.....

Playtime - Winner or Loser?
by LVE

Comment by giega:
LOL

Playtime - Winner or Loser?
by LVE

Comment by Hawkeye:
IMO this is a well focussed photo and I like the sharpness and clarity. It really is a pity about the poor attempt at crude humour. Sorry.

Atlantic Ebb Tide - "plants a kiss on the shore...."
by LVE

Comment by IceRock:
Empty picture

Playtime - Winner or Loser?
by LVE

Comment by kcgriz:
good idea but still a pretty basic shot.

Playtime - Winner or Loser?
by LVE

Comment by JayWalk:
A bit dark an sexier underwear would have made more of an impact.

Atlantic Ebb Tide - "plants a kiss on the shore...."
by LVE

Comment by Nyck:
lovely rays of sunshine!

Playtime - Winner or Loser?
by LVE

Comment by lauraodom:
Overall lighting is a little dull/dark.