Wooden Top - The Making Of
by guerito

Comment by graphicfunk:
The lathe. Nice capture.

Hammer And Anvil
by guerito

Comment by rlpenman1:
Relevance to theme – 3/3

Composition – 1/3

Technical (Lighting ectâ€Â¦) – 1/2

Creativity – 1/2

Wooden Top - The Making Of
by guerito

Comment by taterbug:
A very refreshing and creative approach to the challenge. A nice clean purposeful composition. A slight suggestion for improvement, maybe show more of the man's face. There is such a great expression on the boy, so intense and focused on the job at hand, I think if you could see the man's face as well would really help drive the story.

Wooden Top - The Making Of
by guerito

Comment by jrtodd:
Subject Impact: Nice visual impact
Meets Challenge: Meets Challenge
Technical: OK
Composition: Good
Creativity: OK

Score: 5

Wooden Top - The Making Of
by guerito

Comment by Elemmennope:
Nice choice of subject.

I think having both subjects faces visible would've been nice. Or maybe a close up on the action, with the large and small hands both visible.

Good job though!

Wooden Top - The Making Of
by guerito

Comment by CLarson557:
Nice picture of a tender moment as one passes on their trade to the young generation. Although I would have liked to see more of Grandpa's face and what they were making, you have captured the moment well.

Wooden Top - The Making Of
by guerito

Comment by digitalknight:
Both faces of concentration would be really great to see. I'd love more contrast - push those blacks all the way to black and you'll have a stronger photo

Hammer And Anvil
by guerito

Comment by DrAchoo:
boy, it's too bad this is a duplicate idea of another pic which was really good. I like the attempt though, but the B&W version of this by someone else is superior.

Wooden Top - The Making Of
by guerito

Comment by Egan:
Interesting, but lacking the face of the teacher

Hammer And Anvil
by guerito

Comment by docurrie:
This would have been a better shot, if taken from a lower angle to get at least a little of his face, also the flash gives you some pretty strong shadows.