Bridge over waterfalls
by igoofry

Comment by Pug-H:
Nicely done with the framing, though I wonder what it would be like in Portrait orientation. ;>þ

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by igoofry

Comment by OdysseyF22:
This is my favorite, based on the two of them being together, their expressions, and the overall composition. It's got a lot of emotion. The only thing I don't like is that you cropped their hands off. Might have been nice if the crop were closer to the tops of their heads and continued down to below their hands/waists.

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by igoofry

Comment by OdysseyF22:
Great pose, she again looks comfortable and like she's having fun. The lighting is a tad bright for my taste, but if you use the Selective Color control in PS to add some black to the blacks, it may balance right out.

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by igoofry

Comment by OdysseyF22:
On-camera flash. If you look back and compare this to the others, it just doesn't stand up. If you decide to continue with doing portraits, you'll want to look into getting some flash units. But the framing here is nice and if the light were less-harsh, the colors would all go well together.

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by igoofry

Comment by OdysseyF22:
The tilt to her head makes the pose seem more fun, and you've even got a big of backlighting going on in her hair on the left, which makes her pop from the BG more.

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by igoofry

Comment by OdysseyF22:
Another nice pose. The crop strikes me as being a bit off - perhaps more of her leg, or none of it.

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by igoofry

Comment by OdysseyF22:
I really like this one, the pose is good and the models look comfortable. Their clothing is a big factor, with them both in blue jeans, but their shirts being black and white, it adds nice contrast. The lighting here is very nice, and the BG is a nice bokeh.

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by igoofry

Comment by OdysseyF22:
This is a nice pose, but the light is a bit harsh. You've got some overexposure to the point of blown highlights on her shirt, and the left side of her face is too hot under her eye. The other thing to watch out for is shadows. I'm just working on this myself, so they stick out in my mind. In this case, the shadow cast by her nose is rather prominant. In natural light, this can only be fixed by adjusting her pose in relation the sun. However, if you have an off-camera flash, you can use it to gently fill that in.

Water Color
by igoofry

Comment by Sheryll:
A bit oversaturated for my liking but, it's still nice.7

Bridge over waterfalls
by igoofry

Comment by wavelength:
Okay, this is overall a really very nice photograph. Nice framing with the leaves, and good eyeflow and leading lines. Expousre and contrast are perfect.

I might like a bit more at the bottom of the frame to raise the falls up a bit. Also, the bridge and color foliage have a somewhat competing effect overall with the falls. Possibly shooting through something with a similar viewpoint framed by leaves that encompases the bridge with the rail leading down from a corner, into the trees, into the right falls, and then leaving some negative space to flow through to the left falls and then back down the bridge and on and on. Could be better if there is a vantage point for such a thing.