Future Travel in Production
by EizlAw

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

When I first viewed this photograph, I did not really see 'Travel' in it. The image itself does not show travel taking place or a mode of travel. I do see your intent with the photo, but I think, in general, you may have deviated too far from the theme of the challenge to score better with this image.

I think a little lower angle possibly would be an improvement so that the information on the computer screen is more visible to the viewer. With an image like this, however, the viewer will have to spend too much time viewing to really grasp your interpretation of the challenge. For this reason, I believe that your comments were few and far between. There is nothing here that grabbed the viewer and said "spend some time looking at me" :)

Technically, I don't see any problems with this image at all. Subjectively, I think it could have been stronger.

The technical ability tells me that you can definitely have command of your camera... keep plugging :)

John Setzler

Future Travel in Production
by EizlAw

Comment by nathaliedoo:
Nice, interesting, everythign on focus.

Future Travel in Production
by EizlAw

Comment by GeneralE:
Is that a graph of projected velocity or ticket prices?

Future Travel in Production
by EizlAw

Comment by Fricken:
A nice commentary to the theme although the picture as such is fairly plain.

Future Travel in Production
by EizlAw

Comment by PTLParsons:
OK. I get it, now. The angles of items are a little hard on the eyes, and the neck. Personally I think it is cropped a little too tightly. Pull back and give yourself some breathing room. I feel there is no breathing room in this. Can you understand?` That's the major problems I see. Not bad. Good thought. I'll give it a 6. PTL

Sky Light
by EizlAw

Comment by Garden Weasel:
Good shot

Sky Light
by EizlAw

Comment by LindaLee:
I do not see any "discernable" subject in the reflections. But maybe you were going for just light/shadow reflections. For me, this photo is very low impact. The only real subject seems to be the light, and I do not find it to be very interesting. The reflections just seem to be a by-product of shooting the light. lhall-4

Sky Light
by EizlAw

Comment by johnny_justjohnny:
not quite reflective enough for my tastes.

Sky Light
by EizlAw

Comment by zadore:
ok

Sky Light
by EizlAw

Comment by jmsetzler:
Meets the Challenge: Yes
Artistic Merit (Would I print/frame/hang it?): 2
Creativity (Did a lot of thought go into this photo?): 4
Technical (Focus/DOF/Lighting/Etc): 3
Composition (Subject well-positioned and framed): 4
WOW Factor (Is the photo interesting?): 3

Score: 3 - setzler