lonely
by Pictar500

Comment by teknon42:
this is very artistic. time stamp included. the individual elements feel a bit careless, but the image commands a strong emotional response nontheless. as a rule including a time stamp is a very very bad idea, but, due to the nature of this image, I feel that it actually contributes to this image.

lonely
by Pictar500

Comment by cghubbell:
Ugh... you never want the time stamp in a photographic competition - totally kills the image.

lonely
by Pictar500

Comment by cpanaioti:
As much as I like what I think you are trying to achieve the date is very distracting.

lonely
by Pictar500

Comment by e301:
Like this very much - great sense of late night road-trip, the strange emotions of travelling, the strange and enhancing views one sees from trains, busses, and the like, that never seem to present themselves at any other time. Pity about the text though, and the inevitable disqualification you'll get for that. Might you not have cloned it out, or are you making a point?

lonely
by Pictar500

Comment by riotspyne:
not sure what you were going for but its too hard to see what is going on here to actually get a mood from this

lonely
by Pictar500

Comment by kennyt:
the time stamp made me feel like this was a video capture

lonely
by Pictar500

Comment by Sailingduck:
I can't make this out. Sorry, it's very hard to critique.

lonely
by Pictar500

Comment by claudia26:
evokes more depression or elusiveness than loneliness and why did you leave the data and time in this crisp orange ?

lonely
by Pictar500

Comment by sixmacs:
Interesting, how'd you get the time and date in there?

lonely
by Pictar500

Comment by annasense:
First, I think you should remove the date from being stamped on the photo... that just screams "snapshot." I'm not really sure what the title is referring to... is there a person in the background somewhere? If that's what that spec is, it really should be focused on more. Also, I think you should have either cropped out the lamp at the top completely, or included it completely. Cutting it in half just draws your attention up there and there's nothing else in the picture that pulls my eye away (except the datestamp). Lastly, I don't know if you should have used a tripod or if you were going for some sort of motion look. To me, and it's just my silly opinion, this just doesn't work well. I think it has potential, though, with a clear, in-focus subject.