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coldaComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
To me ... this is very english beauty type shot ... so much the young gentry :)
Composition:
I love how you got him in the perfect third of the shot ... the background really adds here ...
Subject:
meets the challenge .... well and truely .. pity that not all get the feeling of the ole english ... but I think it is truely here.
Technical (Colour and light):
of course natural light ... and great colours .. the makeup you have used on your poor kid really makes the face look fantastic .. you should be proud.
To grow its vote?:
try to get it through that not everyone lives in the same environment. So many things that i have entered that mean lots here in NZ mean nothing on this site .. no matter how good the shot. This shot is a top 10 to me.
Summary:
Great work .. keep it up .. try completing yur photographers comments as well.
Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
Message edited by author 2006-05-27 21:59:36.